Writing in Room 7
Writing has started off with some fantastic recounts and a very creative procedure!
The recounts of everyone's holiday were so interesting with some great language and exciting vocabulary. We helped each other editing by buddying up and using our blue to do and gold for glory system. Everyone really helped each other by offering good suggestions to help make each others' work make sense and interesting for others. You can read these recounts on individual Blogs and they are up on the wall in the classroom.
Last week we had a great science experiment in class using milk, food colouring and dish liquid. What fun that was! Our focus was on using interesting hooks, and there are certainly some fantastic examples to view on their Blogs.
The recounts of everyone's holiday were so interesting with some great language and exciting vocabulary. We helped each other editing by buddying up and using our blue to do and gold for glory system. Everyone really helped each other by offering good suggestions to help make each others' work make sense and interesting for others. You can read these recounts on individual Blogs and they are up on the wall in the classroom.
Last week we had a great science experiment in class using milk, food colouring and dish liquid. What fun that was! Our focus was on using interesting hooks, and there are certainly some fantastic examples to view on their Blogs.
very nice i'll have to do that with my friends
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